Rajarshi says:- Yet another one through personal realisation... a bit too psychedelic i guess
The land is warm but the breeze is cool,
The dusts are not shy, so the bugs do rule,
The faces burn with ambition bright
But the eyes moisten when the west is in sight.
The din harmonises the cycles' pedals,
A few though wait ... some Romeos shed no petals.
The sands though care not waiting Romeos,
As the silhouttes bid their last adieu,
The adieu ushers the promise of spirit,
Of wild thoughts, wild Freudian slips,
A different din now wafts in the darkness,
Accentuated by vignettes of laughter and dizzy dancing,
The moon reflects the bloody rose,
The clock tower gifts me a promiscous wink,
As I pass the scores of cycles...
Cycling through wind so thick,
My eyes look up to the west sky,
Studded with glittering crystal balls
That tell of tales from the west
Every eyelid droops,
As moisture breaks the barriers of every self reliant De Marco.
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What breathtaking imagery!
I sense the beginnings of a sense of belonging.
:]
Good for you!
PS: The city is fine. It rained yesterday! XD
Oh and er, I'm not in JU. :P
Oh and I loved the title and all it implies. :D
beautifully written...and wonderful imageries!!
i think i am coming...give me the exact dates...wont come if its clashing with my vacations...m in the drama team
:) ..love it,very vivid descriptions,you really write well.ho hum,write some more!:D
Breathtaking!
"Of wild thoughts, wild Freudian slips"
@sohini...Thanx!!!!
and er..sorry i later came to know that you are in Xaviers
@littleboxes...OASIS starts from the fifteenth of oct...gosh!!!!!
i am a part of the english drama club here as well...we might as well end up competing with each other!!!
@shreya...Thanx..hope lfe is fine for you..mine is tooooo busy..24 hours and i mean it...work work work 24 hours...
well written and well-rhymed...
dats something i haven't come across in a while now
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